Relationships between parents (fathers) and children - arguments of the Unified State Examination. Arguments for writing the Unified State Examination. The problem of motherhood. How does the image of a mother appear to us? What does the power of mother's love mean? The Problem of Mother's Love Commentary

20.10.2019

Essay plan 15.3 on the topic"Mother's Love"*

  1. A holy and strong feeling is maternal love (definition);
  2. Mom's kindness and tact;
  3. Manifestation of maternal love;
  4. Mother's love is different for everyone.

Essay example 15.3

Mother's love is the most selfless, strong, bright feeling in the world. After all, there is so much connected with the mother’s name. She is always next to us, she will always find the right words for support. Mom takes care of us. Throughout our lives we feel her tenderness, strength, and support. Mom, like an angel descended from heaven, protects us and helps us overcome difficulties.

There is nothing more important in life than mom. Her affection seems to be enough not only for her own children, but for all the children in the world. She, like a huge bird, is ready to protect her cubs from the danger that threatens them.

In sentences 13-16 of the proposed text, we observe how carefully the mother escorts her son to school, how tactful she is in showing her care. The boy, who considers himself old enough, does not want to be seen off. And mom obediently puts the things she took back in their place. But concern for her son drives her after him, and she, hiding so that the boy would not be offended, goes, accompanying him to school... And a little later, in sentences 34-41, when the hero of the work sees his mother standing in the rain at the school windows , his soul becomes warmer because his mother is nearby. These short lines reveal an all-consuming, bright and strong feeling - maternal love.

I remember my mother as an eternal busybody. She worked so hard, but her love and patience were always enough for me. She solved problems with me and taught me poetry. And if something didn’t go well at school, she always gave advice. Mom witnessed my first love and helped me get over my unrequited feeling. She was there when I was unwell. And she never said that she was in pain or that she was tired. Mom wisely guides me through life, and always tries to find an excuse for my not always correct actions. For her, I am still that baby who needs to be taken care of and looked after, the best and beloved child in the world.

Speaking about maternal love, I cannot help but recall Kedrin’s poem, which is called “Heart”. The hero of the work cut open his mother's chest to give the girl her heart. When he fell, the mother's heart sank. The son, who killed his mother for the sake of love for a girl, asked with a fallen heart: “Are you hurt, son?” These words once again confirm the correctness of our statement that a mother’s love is able to withstand any test for the sake of her child.

To sum it up, we can say that mother's love cannot be defined by any one term. This feeling defies definition. For each of us, maternal love is different and everyone understands it in their own way.

Teacher's comment:

Where to start preparing for an argumentative essay?

  • When starting work, remember that you must show your ability to reason and think on a given topic; it is important to be able to convince that you are right.
  • An argumentative essay usually consists of 3-4 parts: definition of the topic, its formulation; justification of the topic (its disclosure) and the final conclusion.
  • You definitely need to make a plan for your essay, it will be easier to write.
  • Parts of the essay should be divided into logical passages, there should be no confusion (that is, if you are talking about one thing, do not insert unnecessary things into your reasoning, do not jump from one thought to another).
  • Use a dictionary of synonyms.
  • Try to use quotations to support your conclusions or number sentences.

*Source text for analysis:

(1) Tolya didn’t like autumn. (2) He didn’t like it because the leaves were falling and “the sun shone less often,” and most of all because it often rained in the fall and his mother wouldn’t let him go outside.
(3) But then the morning came when all the windows were in winding water paths, and the rain was hammering and hammering something into the roof... (4) But mother did not keep Tolya at home, and even hurried her. (5) And Tolya felt that now he was very big: dad also went to work in any weather!
(6) Mom took out an umbrella and a white raincoat from the closet, which Tolya secretly put on instead of a robe when he and the guys played doctors.
- (7) Where are you going? – Tolya was surprised.
- (8) I’ll accompany you.
- (9) Should I... see you off? (10) What are you?
(11) Mom sighed and put the prepared things back in the closet.
(12) Tolya really liked running to school in the rain. (13) Once he turned around and suddenly saw his mother on the other side of the street. (14) There were a lot of raincoats and umbrellas on the street, but he recognized his mother immediately. (15) And she, noticing that Tolya turned around, hid around the corner of an old two-story house.
(16) “Hiding!” – Tolya thought angrily. (17) And he ran even faster, so that his mother would not try to catch up with him.
(18) Near the school itself, he turned around again, but his mother was no longer there.
(19) “I’m back,” he thought with relief.
(20) At the ceremonial line, the students lined up by class. (21) The young teacher quickly brushed wet strands of hair from her face and shouted:
– (22) First “B”! (23) First “B”!
(24) Tolya knew that the first “B” was him. (25) The teacher took the children to the fourth floor.
(26) While still at home, Tolya decided that he would never sit at a desk with a girl. (27) But the teacher, as if jokingly, asked him:
- (28) You probably want to sit down with Chernova, right?
(29) And it seemed to Tolya that he really had always dreamed of sitting next to Chernova.
(30) The teacher opened the magazine and began roll call. (31) After roll call she said:
- (32) Orlov, please close the window.
(33) Tolya immediately jumped up and went to the window, but it was not easy for him to reach the handle. (34) He stood up and suddenly froze on tiptoe: outside the window he suddenly saw his mother. (35) She stood holding a folded umbrella in her hands, not paying attention to the rain that was dripping from her raincoat, and slowly ran her eyes along the school windows: mom probably wanted to guess in which class her Tolya was sitting.
(36) And then he could not get angry. (37) On the contrary, he wanted to lean out into the street, wave to his mother and shout loudly, so as not to be drowned out by the rain:
– (38) Don’t worry! (39) Don’t worry, mommy... (40) Everything is fine! (41) But he couldn’t shout, because shouting is not supposed to happen in class.
(According to A. Aleksin)*

* Aleksin Anatoly Georgievich (born in 1924) – writer, playwright. His works, such as “My Brother Plays the Clarinet”, “Characters and Performers”, “Third in the Fifth Row”, etc., tell mainly about the world of youth.(from Open Bank FIPI)

The material was prepared by Larisa Gennadievna Dovgomelya

"What is mother's love"

Myski city, Kemerovo region.

As a literary example we can take

· read works according to the literature course program and extracurricular works,

· texts of one block,

· other texts from the open task bank of the FIPI website, corresponding to the topic of the essay.

Giving an example from the text of the KIM examination version (first argument), the student can write: In the text NN...

When using third-party text (second argument), the author and title of the work should be indicated.

If a student finds it difficult to determine the genre of a work, then you can write: In the work NN "SS" ...

Using an Expression In the book NN "SS" ... possible for large works, since for works of small and medium forms (short story, essay, novella, etc.) the book can be a collection.

The beginning of the 3rd paragraph could be like this: As a second argument, I would like to give an example from the book (story, story, etc.) NN “SS”.


Maternal love is love for your children, manifestations of maternal feelings and care for them. This is the willingness to protect your child at any time, even at the cost of life.

Let us turn to the work of D. N. Mamin-Sibiryak. Emel's grandfather was hunting a doe with a fawn. The mother tried in every possible way to avert the threat from the calf. The grandfather, participating in this fight, remembered how his daughter defended her son from the wolves that attacked them. She died, but her son survived. These memories saved the lives of defenseless animals.

Let's remember our daily life. She is also surrounded by the love and care of our mothers.

Every mother, when her child is sick, does not leave his side, cares and worries, showing her love.

Based on life situations, we can conclude that maternal love manifests itself not only among people, but also among animals.

Updated: 2017-05-18

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Essay-reasoning on the topic of mother's love

Motherly love is a special feeling available only to mothers. We examine the features of its manifestation in examples of essays. 🙂

The first version of the essay (based on the text by A.G. Aleksin “Tolya didn’t like autumn. He didn’t like it because the leaves were falling...”)

Definition of the concept

Motherly love is a feeling that knows no barriers, restrictions or any conventions. It is endless, resisting it is a pointless and stupid exercise. Mom is the only person in the world who loves us unconditionally, in any situation, no matter how we show ourselves.

A.G. Aleksin tells the story of a boy’s first trip to school, to first grade. Tolya wanted to seem like an adult and did not allow his mother to accompany him, but she still followed him, watching him from around the corner. Seeing her for the first time in a crowd of endlessly walking people, the boy got a little angry. Perhaps he simply did not understand what it meant to her mother's heart to let him go alone into adulthood. But he felt all the warmth of her heart and his love for her when he opened the classroom window and saw her, her eyes wandering around the windows of the school building. I so wanted to wave her hand and reassure her, to say that he was fine. But you can’t behave like that in class.

An argument from personal experience

We do not always understand our own mothers, sometimes we do not know their feelings. They seem stupid to us, sometimes crossing the boundaries of our own ideas about care and love. We will probably have to fully understand maternal feelings only when we have our own children.

Conclusion

Mother's love protects us throughout our lives. You cannot scold your mother or be offended by her for being overprotective. Only a mother can love us without demanding anything in return. The bond between mother and child cannot be broken. Sometimes we realize this too late.

Second version of the essay (based on the text by Mikhail Ageev “One day in early October, early in the morning, while leaving for the gymnasium, I forgot the envelope my mother had prepared in the evening...”)

Definition of the concept

Motherly love is a feeling, or perhaps a state of mind, that cannot be destroyed by anything. No matter how the child behaves, no matter what problems he causes, mother’s love only grows stronger. Moreover, mothers love those people more for whom they have to worry more. That's how a mother's heart works.

Argument from the text read

A mother can also cope with her own child’s arrogant attitude towards her. Mikhail Ageev narrates the story that happened to high school student Vadichka. Because he forgot the money to pay for his studies, his mother brought it to the gymnasium herself. But the boy was so embarrassed by his poorly dressed mother that he did not want to approach her, and to the questions of the schoolchildren he answered that this was their governess. Looking at her from the side, Vadichka felt sorry for her mother, but not for long. Probably, at that moment he simply did not think about the fact that his mother was suffering from poverty and had grown old before her time for the sake of his education, for the sake of his future.

An argument from personal experience

Often we don’t think about the cost at which our parents, our mothers raise us, get clothes, food, toys. Sometimes, in an effort to provide a better future for their child, mothers forget themselves, and children, not realizing the seriousness of their sacrifice, begin to feel embarrassed and isolate themselves from them.

Conclusion

Mother's love is the most powerful feeling in the world. It is capable of overcoming all difficulties and troubles: hunger, poverty, humiliation, ingratitude. It should be the goal of every child to ensure the happiness and peace of their mothers.

The third version of the essay (using the example of the text by Yu. Ya. Yakovlev “No one, like a mother, knows how to hide her suffering and torment so deeply ...”)

Definition of the concept

Mother's love is the deepest feeling that can overcome all life's difficulties and problems. Often a mother sacrifices herself to protect her child from want or hunger, and when it is impossible to avoid this, she is ready to accept the child’s dissatisfaction, but not weigh adult problems on him.

Argument from the text read

This situation is described in the text by Yu.Ya. Yakovlev, who is trying to convey to the reader that sometimes we misunderstand our mothers and judge them undeservedly harshly. And all because we don’t know even a small part of the suffering that she has to experience, looking at the only piece of sausage lying on her son’s plate. Only many years later, the hero of the story understood why my mother looked out the window for so long, why her shoulders trembled, how hard it was for her to hear the reproachful sound of the door slamming.

An argument from personal experience

We don't know much about the lives of our own parents. About what difficulties they have to face, at what cost they get our well-being. Understanding comes with age, when a person has his own children, and he, now from the side of the parent, enjoys children's unconscious cruelty.

Conclusion

Mother's love, mother's heart is the most precious thing for every person. This is what protects us throughout our lives, gives us strength and supports us in any situation in which we find ourselves.

Option 1

In my opinion, this is the strongest feeling in the world, based on support, affection, care and, of course, warmth. We can also say that this is the kind of love that does not require anything in return, does not require making a choice - me or him. I believe that one of the main components of maternal love is care. It is thanks to the care coming from the mother that every child feels protected, needed, and, above all, loved... However, sometimes the mother’s love is, no matter how strange it may seem, excessive, harmful to the child. I will prove my position with examples from the text of Anatoly Georgievich Aleksin and life experience.

To prove my point of view, I will turn to Anatoly Nekrasov’s work “Mother’s Love,” which shows love that harms the child and brings suffering to parents, children and society as a whole. After reading this book, the reader will, without a doubt, reconsider his views on life and, perhaps, in the future, approaching the issue of education seriously and responsibly, will make the right choice...

I think I have proven that maternal love is, first of all, the need for care, protection and help to those who need this support, to those who cannot yet exist independently in this world. Mother's love, based on mercy, compassion, kindness and tolerance, helps to develop the strongest sides of a little person. However, the mother must understand that her excessive love can cripple the child’s life.

Option 2

What is mother's love? This is the purest, sincerest and strongest love. This is free love. After all, a mother loves her child, not because he did something, but because it is her child. I believe that mother's love is not only love for her child, but also for other children. This is explained by the fact that a mother’s heart is like a bottomless cup of tenderness, care, attention, in which there is room for love for all children.

I would also like to recall the poem “Heart” by D. Kedrin that I recently read. A Cossack, having cut his mother's chest with a blade, brings the girl a mother's heart as a gift. But on the porch he fell, and his mother’s heart fell out of her hands. But despite everything, the mother’s heart asked her son if he had hurt himself. This act of the “heart” shows the enormous power of mother’s love: she forgave him.

Thus, we have proven the enormous “size” of mothers’ hearts, in which there is a place not only for their own children, but also for other people’s children who need their maternal help. We realized that a mother's love is limitless.

Option 3

"What is mother's love?" - you ask. In my opinion, maternal love is the boundless, strong, all-conquering love of a mother for her child. She will always help him, take care of him, listen to his son and daughter with understanding, and support him in his endeavors. For every child, a mother is the support of their entire life.

Maternal love is the boundless love of a mother for her child: she gives him her tenderness, kindness, affection. His mother always understands him, will support him in difficult times, and will never betray him. For him, she is the support of his whole life.

As a second argument confirming the thesis, I will take an example from life experience. Once I read a legend about two mounds. What struck me most was the son’s attitude towards his mother. He had a wife who did not love his mother. When the girl asked the hero to bring the heart of his mother, he was able to kill her, but, carrying her heart in his hand, he could not stand it, cried and regretted his terrible act. And the love of a mother who wished well for her son performed a miracle: “the heart came to life, the torn chest closed, the mother stood up and pressed her son’s curly head to her chest.” What struck me most about this legend was the boundless mother’s love: after everything her son did, she forgave him.

Thus, I proved that maternal love is a huge force, creative, creative, inspiring. She is capable of working miracles, reviving life, saving from dangerous diseases...